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Poster: Mandojammer Date: Apr 20, 2010 11:33am
Forum: GratefulDead Subject: Re: The rules of forum posting - a reminder for newcomers

"you are insane. i like the way you try and come off like you have anything to do with the rules around here. you are no more of a user than i am. you try and phrase your posts like you are some big wig around here
what a sham you are. and a coward. "you are an account executive" yeah - i have a job and what i make per week is probably equal to the check your mommy sends you every week.
you know me who i am and i still have the balls to tell you to FUCK OFF. fucking fraud."

"you are insane."

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"i like the way you try and come off like you have anything to do with the rules around here."

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"you are no more of a user than i am."

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"you try and phrase your posts like you are some big wig around here"

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"what a sham you are."

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"and a coward."

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'"you are an account executive" yeah - i have a job and what i make per week is probably equal to the check your mommy sends you every week.'

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"you know me who i am and i still have the balls to tell you to FUCK OFF."

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"fucking fraud."

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Back to 4th Grade English, Dude North bigshot he-man lawyer type.

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